The Dacquoise Rainbowcy

Hi I have a Rainbowcy that I just started.



Generation One - Chiffon Dacquoise

Chapter One

Chapter Two

]Chapter Three

Chapter Four


I would very much appreciate any comments.

Thanks for taking the time to read.

Mango

I love it! It's so different from the other rainbowcies i've read. I don't understand Citrus, he seems a little wierd, but I adore Chiffon, I just hope she stands up to Citrus and finds herself a nice man

I'm really looking forward to reading the next chapter!!!

Chapter 2 at http: // simtasiaillusions . blogspot . com
(copy and paste the url removing the spaces).

I'm interested!!! Can't wait for chapter 3!

@ Serendipity - Thank you for commenting. I'm glad you are enjoying it.

@4evatexan - Thank you for commenting. The next chapter should be up soonish - I'm so carried away with my plot at the moment that I'm almost on to the second Generation in my game - this means I have lots of writing to catch up on -hopefully good news for those who are following

Hmm..interesting

I like that Chiffon is very goal-driven!

But, I also want to know why she should stay away from Lime?

Chapter 3 is now up.

I hope you enjoy

Mango

@ BethK - All will be revealed in due course about Citrus Lime's strange behaviour, but there is alot of drama yet to come.....Thanks for reading and commenting.

Ooooh I'm glad he likes her!

Too bad it had to end awkwardly with him kicking out of his bed though. But the real mystery is who could that women be? So many possibilities.

BethK - The plot starts to get interesting now, but it will be a while before the pieces start to fit together, yes there are so many possibilities, but I'll be interested to know if any of your possibilities actually agree to the plot - you will have to let me know when the plot is finally unraveled.

oh you will know alright haha, I'll be following

Hi Guys, sorry I haven't got an update up yet, I'm having some issues with my game. It won't let me load my saved game without crashing. I'm not sure why, as it was working fine about a week ago. Has anyone else had this problem? Any help would be greatly appreciated. Thanks Mango